[shmerek]

Hi I made a website for my girlfriend (actually ex as of friday) and I wanted some opinions;

Are there any things about it that scream "created by a wanna be"?
Any suggestions as what I could do to make it more functional or just plain better?

She is a young singer just starting her career and its purpose is information ie. bio, rep and things like that. Obviously she is a woman therefore I tried to make the site a bit feminine. The layout is quite simple and that is what she wanted.

There might still be a few typos and stuff like that I am still trying to work out the bugs so any advice would be appreciated. Thanks

and the link

[Simon Mundy]

Originally posted by shmerek:
Hi I made a website for my girlfriend (actually ex as of friday) and I wanted some opinions;

Are there any things about it that scream "created by a wanna be"?
Any suggestions as what I could do to make it more functional or just plain better?

She is a young singer just starting her career and its purpose is information ie. bio, rep and things like that. Obviously she is a woman therefore I tried to make the site a bit feminine. The layout is quite simple and that is what she wanted.

There might still be a few typos and stuff like that I am still trying to work out the bugs so any advice would be appreciated. Thanks

and the link

Sorry to hear about the -ex.

The site looks great! For the intended audience and the subject matter, I think it is beatifully restrained and appropriate.

Can't help you with the typos - I don't speak French

Perhaps it's lacking one thing that I may expect from a singer/musician's site... AUDIO!

[shmerek]

Originally posted by Simon Mundy:


Sorry to hear about the -ex.

The site looks great! For the intended audience and the subject matter, I think it is beatifully restrained and appropriate.

Can't help you with the typos - I don't speak French

Perhaps it's lacking one thing that I may expect from a singer/musician's site... AUDIO!

Thanks, as for the audio all the recordings I do have of her she isn't happy with nothing so there won't be any until records again.

[skalie]

Originally posted by shmerek:
Are there any things about it that scream "created by a wanna be"?

No, not at all.

"Repertoire" not "repetoire".

[derbs]

like the site very much, clean and simple.

Couple of points though. Don't like the typeface you used for the menu in the top right corner, it's just a personal preference though. Also, no need for a 'last updated' feature, looks a bit amateur and can look old if you don't update it very often

Apart from that, good work man!

[shmerek]

Thanks for the tips guys I will lost the last update thing, and I am still looking for where I spelled repertoire wrong.

[skalie]

Originally posted by shmerek:
I am still looking for where I spelled repertoire wrong.

You didn't.

Apologies.

Something to do with connecting data flow between brain and dictionary this end.

[shmerek]

Originally posted by skalie:


You didn't.

Apologies.

Something to do with connecting data flow between brain and dictionary this end.

Actually I did it was in the links at the bottom!

[qnc]

really bad but a kind of once a month if that view unless your really into her and her music.

need something to keep me coming bad

updates yes but what I don't know.

Also some suble dynamics may be cool

Quincy

[shmerek]

Originally posted by qnc:
really bad but a kind of once a month if that view unless your really into her and her music.

need something to keep me coming bad

updates yes but what I don't know.

Also some suble dynamics may be cool

Quincy

Sorry but I have no idea what you are saying here

[frogstar]

Very elgant site. My only comment is that the navbar in the top-right disappears when viewing the photographs. This isn't a major problem, but could be an annoyance to visitors who decide they want to look at other areas of the site after viewing a few photographs.

There is space for the navbar. Why not put it in and save the visitor a few clicks?

[shmerek]

Originally posted by frogstar:
Very elgant site. My only comment is that the navbar in the top-right disappears when viewing the photographs. This isn't a major problem, but could be an annoyance to visitors who decide they want to look at other areas of the site after viewing a few photographs.

There is space for the navbar. Why not put it in and save the visitor a few clicks?

I can do that!