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Another.... Site Review!
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Aug 16, 2007, 03:35 PM
 
My site is nothing special, I made it in iWeb, then uploaded the files and tweaked some HTML. Basically, I want to know if it looks different enough from the iWeb template to be called unique. I know it looks really "mac made" but does it differ enough from the template?

http://adamfishercox.com
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Aug 16, 2007, 04:37 PM
 
I don't understand your resumé section. It's disjointed and disorganized.

Also, images load very slowly.
     
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Aug 16, 2007, 04:38 PM
 
yeah, I know the resume sucks... It's not even really a resume. I'm looking for more of a critique on the look, though.
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Aug 17, 2007, 08:06 PM
 
I like the opening page. I generally like about your site, that it has a simple, not a flashy show-off design.

Proposal 1: make the four words on the bottom of the image the links and get rid of its doubles above it. The first one suspects as a link are the word with the bigger font.

Proposal 2: Make e-mail link smaller, or a visitor might get the idea you were being desperate just because of the way the link's size.

That would make the title page cleaner. Just the rectangle of the photo with the links inside, and a small e-mail link, which could be in red, if it is smaller.
     
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Aug 17, 2007, 08:08 PM
 
Great ideas that shall be employed
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