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Apr 10, 2008 , 08:54 PM
 
Originally Posted by - - e r i k - - View Post
Hella boring or interesting to some?

I love the DEEP blue, but I think the crop on the sides is a bit too tight.


Here's a close crop of a large marble globe at the community zoo in Lafayette, IN.


And the all too difficult "Up the Tree" shot.

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Apr 10, 2008 , 09:01 PM
 
The ‘up a tree’ shot really is a pain. I don’t think you’ve quite got away with it there, either. I like the enhanced contrast between the almost yellowish light leaves and the dark green leaves in the background, but the stem is—as always in these pictures—too dark and takes too much focus.
     
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Apr 10, 2008 , 09:05 PM
 
When I master the "Up the Tree" shot, then I will be a Jedi.

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Apr 10, 2008 , 09:37 PM
 
Old and tired:


New hotness:
(Last edited by - - e r i k - - : Apr 10, 2008 at 10:57 PM )

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Apr 10, 2008 , 09:40 PM
 
that looks better. now if you make it look as if he's sliding off a skateboard and wearing a helmet
     
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Apr 10, 2008 , 09:44 PM
 
Originally Posted by - - e r i k - - View Post
Old and tired:
[img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2262/2403995985_6caa0d1998.jpg[img]

New hotness:
[img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2285/2402260909_b548c987e0.jpg[img]
Much better. Removing the reflections improved it quite a bit. But you lost some of the deep blue up top and what is that "goo" in the upper corners?

Needs more lens flare.

More trees:

בְּטַח אֶל-יְהוָה, בְּכָל-לִבֶּךָ; וְאֶל-בִּינָתְךָ, אַל-תִּשָּׁעֵן.
     
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Apr 10, 2008 , 10:40 PM
 
My first contender:

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Apr 10, 2008 , 11:01 PM
 
Originally Posted by Railroader View Post
Much better. Removing the reflections improved it quite a bit. But you lost some of the deep blue up top and what is that "goo" in the upper corners?
Goo is fixed now. Had a hell of a time getting this background right. Lots and lots of cloning, checking with treshold, more cloning and repairing, rinse and repeat.

I'll probably redo it from the original RAW 16-bit when I get home from work anyway. Worked of the JPEG for this one. And there was nothing to uncrop, so the extended background had to be faked.

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Apr 10, 2008 , 11:08 PM
 
Originally Posted by mindwaves View Post
My first contender:

I like it. More contrast and saturation would probably make it more interesting though. Perhaps a vignette

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Apr 10, 2008 , 11:08 PM
 
Originally Posted by Railroader View Post
More trees:
Good, but the angle feels like it should be steeper. Perhaps if you had moved a bit to the right. Out of focus foreground objects in the top right also distracts quite a bit.

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Apr 10, 2008 , 11:53 PM
 
Originally Posted by - - e r i k - - View Post
New hotness:
Hotter hotness:
     
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Bwahah! If I had been drinking something It would have been all over the monitor.
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Apr 11, 2008 , 12:16 AM
 
I approve

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Apr 11, 2008 , 02:12 PM
 
Wanna have fun? do a google image search for "this is sparta" Warning! NSFW

בְּטַח אֶל-יְהוָה, בְּכָל-לִבֶּךָ; וְאֶל-בִּינָתְךָ, אַל-תִּשָּׁעֵן.
     
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Apr 12, 2008 , 12:45 AM
 
Critique this if you dare ( if she doesn't like what you have to say she will come after you):

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Apr 12, 2008 , 06:31 AM
 
OMG 1980's stock shot.

Sorry, sorry, sorry. I'm sure there is much skill involved, just not my cup of tea.
     
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Apr 12, 2008 , 06:52 AM
 
Originally Posted by cszar2001 View Post
Critique this if you dare ( if she doesn't like what you have to say she will come after you):
I've never seen a revolver that tosses out brass like that. She's going to slip on that stuff for sure-probably poke herself with that letter opener too.

Sarcasm aside, it's not my cup of tea either, and you'll get a lot of feedback about the subject matter and maybe not much at all on composition, post-processing, etc.
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Apr 12, 2008 , 07:53 AM
 
critique this

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