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Photo Critique Thread - [JPEG] (Page 9)
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Nice work. I'd like the skies to have a little more snap to them, but I get the idea.
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Yeah, I wasn't sure how much "striping" you wanted to the clouds to have against the sky, so I kept it subdued.
Fall in love with the Soft Light blending mode and circular white-to-transparent gradients.  I don't remember every single step I took, but I remember these...
Selected just the guy at 15-30 feather, filled with white, the used Soft Light at around 20 to 40%.
I then erased the soft light layer on his pants because of color blocking
Used a radial gradient on his head o lighten his face
Used soft light at around 20% to boost contrast, overall.
Inverse selected the guy to Curve the sky to the slight blue
and so on...
I didn't mess with the grass at all, but you know how to boost crap like that already.
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Originally Posted by - - e r i k - - 
Sorry I missed this shot earlier. It really deserves to be viewed large. Really cool (hah!) shot!
Great job!
Thanks for the encouragement Erik — I may have to toss another shot or two in the mix 
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Definitely do it, Rampant1. Keep posting.
And thanks, Railhead.
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Please, call me Maury.
/got nothin'
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Didn't know how people feel about that around here.
For instance, - - e r i k - - refuses to go by his real name of "Fitzgerald."
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Hm, in that case, make it !1!!1! - - - - m - a - u - r -y - - - - !1!!1!
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Sure thing, !1!!1! - - - - m - a - u - r - y - - - - !1!!1!!
Gosh, now I feel much more personal.
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i really enjoy your photos above mr. d
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Ooh...ominous sounding name.
And seriously...your sig is mind-altering all by itself.
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Critique... But add how it makes you feel, what messages or stories if any it speaks to your mind.
 
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"Those who expect to reap the blessings of freedom must, like men, undergo the fatigue of supporting it!"
- Thomas Paine
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that candyland board game
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Originally Posted by turtle777
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I like these allot! (Yes, that's my critique.)
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"Those who expect to reap the blessings of freedom must, like men, undergo the fatigue of supporting it!"
- Thomas Paine
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Originally Posted by brassplayersrock²
that candyland board game
Got a link?
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"Those who expect to reap the blessings of freedom must, like men, undergo the fatigue of supporting it!"
- Thomas Paine
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Originally Posted by brassplayersrock²
Hehehehe, yeah, that's pretty close...
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"Those who expect to reap the blessings of freedom must, like men, undergo the fatigue of supporting it!"
- Thomas Paine
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Sorry, but it just looks sloppy to me. No messages or anything.
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Originally Posted by Tesselator
Critique... But add how it makes you feel, what messages or stories if any it speaks to your mind.
[img]http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Private/_PICT1093Small.jpg[img] [img]http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Private/_Pict1093Small_Info.png[img]
I don't like this shot.
Noise in the sky is distracting. People out of focus. Trees are poorly framed. The "path/walk" is distracting and should be cropped out. DOF on the trees is too wide making them look flat.
What's the deal with the EXIF info?
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בְּטַח אֶל-יְהוָה, בְּכָל-לִבֶּךָ; וְאֶל-בִּינָתְךָ, אַל-תִּשָּׁעֵן.
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Originally Posted by Railroader
What's the deal with the EXIF info?
Well, it's just a scaled raw import - no cropping or nothing. A few settings changed
in the camera raw but nothing major - so I thought the EXIT might be interesting
to see. Guess not... (??)
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"Those who expect to reap the blessings of freedom must, like men, undergo the fatigue of supporting it!"
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This is really just a kind of funny shot rather than one for critique:
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