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critique my Ai glass bottle project
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Def_ears
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Nov 20, 2007, 02:31 PM
 
I modeled it after a picture of a blue bottle. I "borrowed" Miyamoto's technique for the plane and the reflection. Tell me what you think. It was a project for my illustrator class.


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slpdLoad
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Nov 20, 2007, 05:18 PM
 
Nice work.

I think your light sources are a little weird though. Shouldn't the table be lighter on the left-front corner, and the darker part be the back right corner where the shadow from the bottle is being cast? Then again there could be multiple lights on the scene. Just a comment.
     
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Nov 20, 2007, 05:21 PM
 
Yeah you're right. Oh well, should be an easy fix.
     
   
 
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