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Please Critique My Book Sample -- Help make a better OS X Book
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Hi,
I am currently working on a book that is designed for people who are switching from Windows to Mac. The book will be about 100 pages and is designed to give people the knowledge most of us longtime Mac users take for granted.
I have posted a three page sample from my section on the Dock to my iDisk. I am currently about 35 pages in and would value any constructive criticism you could offer.
http://homepage.mac.com/mikemalkin/FileSharing1.html
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Originally Posted by newportnews
Hi,
I am currently working on a book that is designed for people who are switching from Windows to Mac. The book will be about 100 pages and is designed to give people the knowledge most of us longtime Mac users take for granted.
I have posted a three page sample from my section on the Dock to my iDisk. I am currently about 35 pages in and would value any constructive criticism you could offer.
http://homepage.mac.com/mikemalkin/FileSharing1.html
Your download won't unzip. Something is wrong with it.
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Professional Poster
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Dedicated MacNNer
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hmm... It was working for me -- I will repost tonight.
Thanks.
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iMac Core 2 Duo 20" 2.16 Ghz //1.5 GB RAM // 250 GB HD
Powerbook G4 1.25 Ghz // 1 GB RAM // 80 GB HD // Backlit Keyboard
iPod Video 30 GB / White
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Worked fine for me, now I just need to look it over
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Dedicated MacNNer
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Reposted -- shpuld work fine now.
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iMac Core 2 Duo 20" 2.16 Ghz //1.5 GB RAM // 250 GB HD
Powerbook G4 1.25 Ghz // 1 GB RAM // 80 GB HD // Backlit Keyboard
iPod Video 30 GB / White
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If you like, and if I can find time, I can send you a commented version which will suggest a few editorial changes.
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