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Haiku
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Senior User
Join Date: Feb 2004
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Apple Leather case
expensive, shunned and reviled
my one perfect love
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Professional Poster
Join Date: Oct 2002
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It's very likely
this thread will quickly be locked
by moderator.
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"You rise," he said, "like Aurora."
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Join Date: Apr 2001
Location: San Antonio TX USA
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Locking only happens
when thoughts stray from the focus
of this forum
So what's so cool about the leather case?
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Glenn -----OTR/L, MOT, Tx
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Mac Elite
Join Date: Nov 2005
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If we stay focused
this probably won't get locked
then again, it might
Covered in scratches
my iPod has seen it all
and will see more still
Oh, and ghporter: you fail at Haiku.
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Any ramblings are entirely my own, and do not represent those of my employers, coworkers, friends, or species
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Professional Poster
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ghporter does
not quite fail at haiku. See,
in translation, the
number of all the
beats, syllables, should be less
than five-seven-five.
On topic: I'd like
a new iPod but I can't
justify the cost.
My 3G is fine,
And my shuffle is finer.
I wonder what's next.
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"You rise," he said, "like Aurora."
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I couldn't come up with an extra beat for the last line without losing the point... So I knew it wasn't a traditional haiku, but the point was made.
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Glenn -----OTR/L, MOT, Tx
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Haiku is quite cool
It makes yu feel quite classy
I stink at spelling
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