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jchen
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Dec 23, 2002, 11:13 PM
 
http://upload.ipaska.net/122002/exp_trance.zip

Alright, this is a song that I've been working on for school in a class I'm taking. I was wondering if I could get some help on this, the problem is that I cannot make this piece longer than a minute, it's very frustrating too. I've spent days working on modifications, etc, but I always end up back to what I have right now. If any of you could offer some constructive criticism, tips, suggestions, that'd be great. Thanks.
     
nonhuman
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Dec 23, 2002, 11:23 PM
 
It sounds pretty cool, but I don't really like that second track that comes in at the beginning. It sounds like it's off-key or something to me, and makes the piece a little too busy for my tastes. (Too many notes )
     
The Dude
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Dec 23, 2002, 11:26 PM
 
Use a different drum. The one you're using sounds too hollow and weak (think Casio).

Variations on that can help the length.
     
   
 
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