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TubaMuffins
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Jan 18, 2004, 02:46 PM
 
this is the first movie i have made, i used my new sony dsc-p72, please critique.http://homepage.mac.com/richallen/iMovieTheater7.html
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Daracle
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Jan 18, 2004, 02:53 PM
 
Not bad for a first movie...
I liked how you added the stills with the video...Very Cool
Who reads this???
     
benign
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Jan 18, 2004, 02:55 PM
 
Very nice ken burns'ing but...

It only has one character and though
she is beautiful, she has no story to tell.


Simple Empire...
     
snct
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Jan 18, 2004, 03:34 PM
 
Originally posted by benign:
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It only has one character and though
she is beautiful, she has no story to tell.
Maui always has a story to tell... Even if it's just to remind us that it is paradise .

I have one critique: Possibly fading the music out at the end would give it a smoother finish. Other than that, I like it.
--Steve
     
Kitschy
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Jan 18, 2004, 04:35 PM
 
Maybe slow down the first two titles. It's too hard to read it as fast as it goes.

Other than that...great!
     
   
 
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