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The real Masters of the Blue Planet
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I found these texts coincidental. As I was interested, I have done a view investigations in the net - and found only a few related websites.
At any rate the files are an interesting SF - short story; if it is more is a question of believing. If it is a SF - Story, the question remains, why the author doesn't makes his remarkable talent of imagination and writing style to his profession.
I would like to hear your comments and analysis of content and style of this texts.
If it's truth than help us god...
P.S.: The text is a translation from swedish language.
Lacerta files, part 1
Lacerta files, part 2
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The style is annoying. It needs to be retranslated into English by a native english speaker. Pfeiffer did a good job, but the tone is abrupt, and difficult to follow.
The italics don't help either.
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