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How about some background on the product?
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The first one looks like something related to the San Diego Chargers. The second one is pretty good. Maybe adjust the kerning on the type atop the logo. Looks very old school.
Not sure about the golden color. Depending on where you use it, it could be a difficult color to reproduce accurately.
Also, on the first one, too much white space under the stars. And supremo is too small.
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thanx
the colors were given by the company and the background (package) is gonna be made once the logo is accepted by the client.
i liike the �simplicity�of the first one but the second one looks more dynamic i guess. once you said that look like something related to the san diego chargers it make sense
anyways, im gonna work doing something with the good stuff of each one.
thank you
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Originally posted by urbatronik:
the colors were given by the company and the background (package) is gonna be made once the logo is accepted by the client.
When I said "background" I actually meant telling us what the logo is for.
It's impossible to effectively crit a logo without this information.
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Originally posted by York911:
How about some background on the product?
oh sorry, foreign language speaker mistake lol
the client is a ham and sausage maker, for this product (supremo) they need something "elegant" because this is the major brand of the company, and they want to compete with other well positioned brands. this is not a new product, is a redesign.
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It's almost impossible to tell that is an "S" at first glance. Also, the banner looks too thick. I like the second one the most still, for what it's worth.
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I'm not crazy about the logos so far. You mentioned that is a re-design, so I am expecting somehing a little more "fresh". The banner idea just seems oldfashioned or typical. I would suggest some sketches (with a pencil). Start with the banners and just keep drawing ideas until it can evolve further. THEN, sit down at the computer and bring them to life. It looks like the software is controlling your ideas right now.
my thoughts anyway.
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